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    Marilyn Minsky is offline Junior Member
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    Act idea:

    I really love the song La Valse d'Amelie...every time I hear it I really want to do a burlesque routine to it. I just see a masquerade bit in front of me...but more as one of those spinning ballerinas, the ones in music boxes.

    Listen, you'll know what I mean: [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1LPj9msobY"]YouTube - Amelie - la valse d' amelie[/ame]

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    I really need feedback and ideas on what else to put:

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    Hi!

    Website is pretty - pink and curleques - nice!

    I think that you've got all the bases covered, page-wise.

    Some pix would be great - esp if you've got a showreel of yourself working.

    Re your e-mail address, I'd do something to camoflage it a little so that autobots can't pick it up when they're hunting for addys and inundate you with unwanted spam!

    Your idea to have music playing on the site is nice - but be careful of copyright infringement ;-)

    Perhaps a links page would be good - linking through to MoB and other sites taht you recommend for burly types?

    Your English is excellent, but there are a couple of things that could maybe be tweeked in the biog bit. I'd change the word 'screamed' for 'squealed'? More cute than screamed? And now I've shut the page and can't remember what else there was! It wasn't much to worry about anyways.

    Good luck!


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    Marilyn Minsky is offline Junior Member
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    Quote Originally Posted by AliX View Post
    Hi!

    Website is pretty - pink and curleques - nice!

    I think that you've got all the bases covered, page-wise.

    Some pix would be great - esp if you've got a showreel of yourself working.

    Re your e-mail address, I'd do something to camoflage it a little so that autobots can't pick it up when they're hunting for addys and inundate you with unwanted spam!

    Your idea to have music playing on the site is nice - but be careful of copyright infringement ;-)

    Perhaps a links page would be good - linking through to MoB and other sites taht you recommend for burly types?

    Your English is excellent, but there are a couple of things that could maybe be tweeked in the biog bit. I'd change the word 'screamed' for 'squealed'? More cute than screamed? And now I've shut the page and can't remember what else there was! It wasn't much to worry about anyways.

    Good luck!


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    Thanks!

    I sure hope that my English's good enough...otherwise the 6 years I spend in NYC would have been a bit of a waste.

    Thanks for the tip with the links...

    p.s. Definitely not putting squealed, reminds me of a piggy.

    As for photos, working on it! :twisted:
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    Oh I've always loved that song and I think it would be a great choice for you! I like the masquerade ballerina idea. Might be a pretty fan dance too!

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    umm thats exactly my act... i avoided the amelie music for a long while due to the obviious connotations but eventually gave in last year to use the music. Cecilia Rouge also uses this music for a fan dance.

    My act is called 'Music Box Dream' and it's a music box doll awakening act combined with a serpentine/isis wing costume.

    The costume has just been re-made and here is a photo before the new costume from TeaseoRama in San Francisco last October

    xx

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    Quote Originally Posted by Amelie Soleil View Post
    umm thats exactly my act... i avoided the amelie music for a long while due to the obviious connotations but eventually gave in last year to use the music. Cecilia Rouge also uses this music for a fan dance.

    My act is called 'Music Box Dream' and it's a music box doll awakening act combined with a serpentine/isis wing costume.

    The costume has just been re-made and here is a photo before the new costume from TeaseoRama in San Francisco last October

    xx
    Hi Amelie, beautiful costume and photos! I'd love to see your act someday.
    It seems like many dancers use the same music now and then. With all of us in different parts of the world it's hard to know who's doing what to what music...

    Hey Marylin, for music in the same vein I'd check out this album:
    [ame=http://www.amazon.com/E18-Album/dp/B001663S2Y/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=dmusic&qid=1246472553&sr=8-1]Amazon.com: E18 Album: MP3 Downloads: Detektivbyrån[/ame]

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    Marilyn - I hope that you weren't offended by my comments about your English, Sincere apologies if you thought I was being patronising :-D

    Website is lovely!

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    Quote Originally Posted by AliX View Post
    Marilyn - I hope that you weren't offended by my comments about your English, Sincere apologies if you thought I was being patronising :-D

    Website is lovely!

    AX
    Oh, don't worry, I really didn't think anything of it.
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