Thread: Newbie pics, want feedback!

I know that I'm not original, yet. I know the quality of the pics is shitty - my photographer boyfriend didn't have time, so I shot it with my phone cam and it needs more light. But besides that?
Constructive critique, please! (meaning "put the bad things in a gentle way")

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1. you have a lovely face and bone structure, you should trade a photographer modeling for pic copies, I am sure any artsy photographer would be glad to have pics of you in his/her portfolio!
2. You could totally pull off the super sexy expression stuff because you have such an innocent look about you! Fetish pics are totally within the realm of your look, you look like you can be sexy without looking like a tramp, which is a total gift!
3. remember, shoulders back and down, chest out, chin up!

best of luck! I would be looking for a better photographer, my husband sucks at pictures so I totally understand

Thank you for the reply and the compliments!
I will work on my posture, I am aware of that I need to work on my back musculature (it's underdeveloped) before I can show myself in public
Plus, it's kind of difficult to pose when I'm holding the camera myself, I can't move my head as I like and it looks pretty riddiculus from some angles because of my bad phone cam...

Good idea about the fetish photo thing, as it's something I'm actually into!

And my photographer is sleeping beside me right now ^^, the pics in the post are ones that I took myself.
My boyfriend is not professional, but he has a good education in photography, so it should work to let him take the picures to begin with - and it's good work for his portfolio as well! He just don't wanna shoot in our apartment because of the bad light, he says it ruins his attempts.

haha I am dumb I thought he took them!
posture is the most difficult part! I work on mine all the time, at the gym I do lat pull downs, long pulls or row, back extensions on the ball and machine etc. It definitely helps!

and fetish shoots are fun, this coming wknd I am going to do a werewolf shoot where I get to be slaughtered by werewolves!! I love fake blood! the only problem is maintaining a straight face, I do not know how many pics there are of me in horrid situations where I am in the middle of a total giggle fest!

good luck doll!

Hey Klara,

Have a look at Starla's tips on the 21st Century Pinups site:

Prrrfect Your Pinup with Starla James!

I've found these really useful. Starla is very experienced as well as being sexy as all hell so she knows what she's talking about

Honey x

Thank you both <3, Lilith and Honey, I'll take your pieces of advice to my heart!

Hi hon.

I just wanted to say, :twothumbs: bloody great going and good results from doing them yourself on your phone cam! When I do phone cam shots of myself they never turn out as good.

x Violet x

PS: Props are always fun to interact with too (as I see you have included a fan).

Hey Violet - totally OT but I love your new avatar!

I saw you perform your tennis act at Madame Jojos last year and thought it was really cute

I have that bra!!!

(It's too late for proper input)